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Edit:I re-drew some lines that was looking messyD:
awwwww
You know,the moment I saw this chara I fell in love.I really,REALLY loved the Peacock and her Falala,and i wanted to draw it;o; but since I suck at drawing animals,I just made FalalaXDDD
Not much to say,just that I like the result and I may color it in the future.Maybe.
Lady Falala belongs to 
,and this is a little gift for her;o; gogogo and give her some love!!
Took around 6 hours to draw itXDDD but it was soo nice;o;
Based on this pic:
awesome,huh?
Love ya!;o;
awwwww
You know,the moment I saw this chara I fell in love.I really,REALLY loved the Peacock and her Falala,and i wanted to draw it;o; but since I suck at drawing animals,I just made FalalaXDDD
Not much to say,just that I like the result and I may color it in the future.Maybe.
Lady Falala belongs to ,and this is a little gift for her;o; gogogo and give her some love!! Took around 6 hours to draw itXDDD but it was soo nice;o; Based on this pic: awesome,huh? Love ya!;o;Image size
1613x2324px 2.26 MB
Make
HP
Model
HP pstc4400
Date Taken
Jan 16, 2010, 6:21:23 PM
© 2010 - 2024 VelCake
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Devious Rating: 4/5
Impact: 4/5
Originality: 3/5
Vision: 4/5
Technique: 4.5/5
Now, one of the reasons I marked you down is mainly because of Falala's legs. As I've noticed with many of your works, your upper legs are frequently too short. In this picture, you arms are a bit too short too. Her chest is also a bt misplaced (excuse me), and the folds on her shirt are a bit...too controlled to seem natural. I don't recommend drawing the same type of fold throughout. You should start some folds on the other side too.
I marked you down for originality, but that's because 1) it's someone else's OC and 2)You seem to draw this pose frequently.
After the negative, I'll give you the positive. First: the lighting.
You didn't do the "one corner light, one corner dark" way. The way you shown light in those rays is of great technique.
Second: the dress. It's extremely intricate, and clean too. Same for all the jewelry and other little embellishments.
Third: peacock references were subtle. You used the dress, and the portrait in the background. This makes it a huge hint that this is the Peacock Lady, but it doesn't smack you right in the face.
Your hair is as good as usual.
PS Did you scan it, or did you take a picture?
Impact: 4/5
Originality: 3/5
Vision: 4/5
Technique: 4.5/5
Now, one of the reasons I marked you down is mainly because of Falala's legs. As I've noticed with many of your works, your upper legs are frequently too short. In this picture, you arms are a bit too short too. Her chest is also a bt misplaced (excuse me), and the folds on her shirt are a bit...too controlled to seem natural. I don't recommend drawing the same type of fold throughout. You should start some folds on the other side too.
I marked you down for originality, but that's because 1) it's someone else's OC and 2)You seem to draw this pose frequently.
After the negative, I'll give you the positive. First: the lighting.
You didn't do the "one corner light, one corner dark" way. The way you shown light in those rays is of great technique.
Second: the dress. It's extremely intricate, and clean too. Same for all the jewelry and other little embellishments.
Third: peacock references were subtle. You used the dress, and the portrait in the background. This makes it a huge hint that this is the Peacock Lady, but it doesn't smack you right in the face.
Your hair is as good as usual.
PS Did you scan it, or did you take a picture?